Can you give me feedback on my script about for a short film about a teen girl trying to gain popularity?

https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B2e70YV2I5D3bTJRdVhYTHF4TlE

A girl named Luna becomes popular when she joins the volleyball. But when she gets kicked off the team as a result of something a cheerleader named Hazel does, she humiliates Hazel by exposing her bulimia to the school. Luna gets guilty and so tries to make amends by posting inappropriate photos all over school to get everyone to forget about Hazel's bulimia.

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